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Progress[edit]

4/18/2011- Started new project (assissting Krusty with Lucien Lachance). First set of edits to the section "A Knife in the Dark"; altered some verbage, tweaked hidden tables for multiple choice response, removed following section including quotes from other NPCs (felt they were somewhat superfluous given the amount of content):

  • When you arrive at the Sanctuary, an exited Ocheeva will welcome you: "Greetings, brother! Greetings! I am Ocheeva, mistress of this Sanctuary. Lucien has told me all about you. I welcome you to the Dark Brotherhood!" On Lucien Lachance, she will comment: "Lucien isn't here very often. His duties with the Black Hand keep him very busy, so he trusts me to keep the Sanctuary in order."
Asking all the inhabitants of the Sanctuary will provide further information on Lucien:
Teinaava: "Ocheeva and I have known Lucien since we were hatchlings. He is the one who trained us in the way of the Shadowscale, and is like a father to us."
Vicente Valtieri: "When I first joined the family, this Sanctuary was controlled by another Speaker. Lucien took over when she was killed while fulfilling a contract."
Antoinetta Marie: "I will always think of Lucien Lachance as my savior. When he found me, I was living in a gutter, an inch away from death. I owe him everything."
Gogron gro-Bolmog: "I once saw Lucien deal with an insubordinate Brother, someone who had broken the Tenets. It took me a week to get the blood off my boots."
Telaendril: "Actually, Lucien did not try to recruit me. Not at first. He tried to kill me. My father wanted me dead, and he hired the Dark Brotherhood to do it. I escaped from Lucien, and paid my father back for his treachery. Lucien came to me again that night with an offer I just couldn't refuse."

Note: Links added to later section of page.
Planning similar alterations to remaining sections over the next few days barring negative feedback to current layout. Dlarsh(T,C) 17:22, 18 April 2011 (UTC)


4/19/2011- Began editing The Purification. Removed following sections:

  • Ocheeva will welcome you back to the Sanctuary with some urgent news: "Ah, Assassin, I must speak with you. It is quite urgent. A sealed letter just arrived from a Dark Brotherhood courier. I recognize this type of parcel. It contains sealed orders. It's addressed to you... from Lucien Lachance. You must open these sealed orders immediately and follow their instructions to the letter. It would seem the Black Hand itself has a task for you."
  • Back in Cheydinhal, Ocheeva will greet you: "You've seen Lucien Lachance, then? Good, good. I know whatever task he has for you will be carried out with skill and discretion."
Additionally, she and a few other members will comment on your secret contract, unknowing it will mean their demise:
Ocheeva: "Lucien Lachance's word is law. Whatever contract he has given you must be carried out, without question."
Telaendril: "Lachance has given you a... a secret assignment? But I've been asking for this chance for so long.... Surely he doesn't doubt my abilities!"
Gogron gro-Bolmog: "Lachance gave me a special assignment once. Had to go all the way to Sumerset Isle for that one, killed me about thirty Elves. Ah, good times...."
Vicente Valtieri: "Lachance would not have selected you for a contract unless he had the utmost confidence in your abilities. Best not let him down."

Some changes made to word choice and tables tweaked to match previous edits as well. Dlarsh(T,C) 16:45, 19 April 2011 (UTC)


4/22/2011- Finished article for now, made similar changes to previous edits. Removed following section from epilogue:

  • At that point, Mathieu Bellamont will reveal himself as the mastermind behind the killings, due to an insane lust for revenge caused by Lucien’s murder of his mother when Mathieu was just a child.